Interested in poetry?

answers1: I was good - although i couldn't read all of it (it said u
must log in to read the rest), t this thought it was good. Very
thoughtful, and a good example that not all poetry has to rhyme.
answers2: While your story is good, that's all it is. This is not a
poem. Separating sentences so that they look like poetry doesn't make
it poetry. I'm sorry to be so harsh; on a positive note, you have a
good command of imagery that would do well in story form rather than
"poetry." <br>
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Hope that was helpful.
answers3: Oh my gosh.... I LOVED this. It was REALLY good and really
gets at your emotions and you can relate to it very well. I enjoyed
it:D Keep writing ;)
answers4: I read this the other day and loved it, and i still do :) <br>
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The word use is good, and it's clear what the subject is.